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Improve Your Shelf Esteem: Book Cover Design Ideas for Indie Authors

First impressions are everything, and what else is a book cover but a reader’s first impression of your story?

What monsters will the protagonist face in this novel? they’ll ask, turning your book over in their hands. 

A horror book cover might use imagery that separates a werewolf novel from a vampire novel—claw marks and full moons versus blood drops and bats.

And is this romance novel funny or sad? The right typeface on a romance book cover alone can tell a reader at a glance.

But how? What ancient and otherworldly magic is this? No magic here—you, too, can create a compelling book cover, one that helps clinch that sale, with a basic understanding of art theory and book marketing. And if you can’t, don’t worry! There are websites overflowing with freelance graphic designers hungry for their next commission.

Book cover design basics

All book covers place two things on full display: the title and the author’s name. (Did we really just tell you this as if you didn’t already know?) 

A book cover design usually contains imagery apart from the text, but some prioritize the typography and color choices to draw the eye and intrigue the mind:

Depending on where you plan to publish—in print, online, or both—our book cover design may also include back matter (a brief, tantalizing description of the story usually found on the back cover or inside the dust jacket) or blurbs from popular reviewers or other authors praising the work or its creator.

Other book cover design essentials

Taste is not universal, but for the purposes of this blog post, we’re going to judge book covers based on the following principles:

  • Color and composition: In concert with the text and imagery, the color palette and arrangement of design elements send subconscious and emotional messages to book browsers.
  • Legibility: Creative fonts can help you stand out, but you want people to be able to remember your book title, which means it needs to be easy to read. 
  • Readership: A good book cover appeals directly to its audience, including the age of their readers and genre expectations.
  • Consistency: Writing a series? Then your book covers should have matching art styles so readers know they’re a package deal.

Famous book cover designs of 2021

Let’s look at a few book covers that appear in many “best of 2021” lists and how they align with these basic principles:

Outlawed by Anna North | Invisible Ink Editing

Outlawed by Anna North

Do I really need to tell you that this novel is set in a fictional late nineteenth-century town in the American west? Imagine a western and tell me that’s not the typeface you’re thinking of? Cowboy hat, kerchief, blue skies—not only does the cover borrow the iconography of American westerns, but the typefaces, muted colors, and light stippling pull inspiration from mass-market western novels of the past.

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Mona by Pola Oloixarac

A psychedelic collage of a face staring directly at you from the darkness. Does its gaze upset or unnerve you? The book will too. Mona is a scathing critique of white literary academia through the trials of its titular character, a Peruvian author competing for a prestigious literary award.

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Paladin’s Strength by T. Kingfisher

Second in the Saint of Steel series, Paladin’s Strength follows the story of a knight and a nun on the heels of a supernatural killer. The designer uses a lot of visual fantasy shorthand here: sword, skulls, beasts, keys, fire. Moreover, the symmetry and wood-cut look telegraphs a kind of timelessness inherent in story books or fairy tales. This is the stuff of legend, it says to window shoppers.

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The Galaxy, and the Ground Within by Becky Chambers

Science fiction is replete with spaceships on its book covers, but what this edition of The Galaxy, and the Ground Within (fourth in the Wayfarers series) gets right is the interplay between the art—the three different ships are the three central characters—and the typography. Where have you seen that lettering before? On truck stops in smalltown America, on signage for roadside diners, on postcards in a souvenir shop. The story takes place at a stopover like these. Except, you know, in space.

Book cover design: hire or DIY?

For self-published authors, there are only two options for designing book covers: hire a designer or design it themselves.

Which is right for you?

Hiring a book cover designer

If you plan on hiring a graphic designer to create your book cover, first and foremost, also plan on paying the artist.

Your novel might be everything to you, but to a graphic designer, it’s a job. Don’t put these people in an uncomfortable position because you’re short on cash or you think it’ll be good exposure for them (it won’t). Publishing a novel is an investment, so if you can’t afford a designer, don’t! Check out our DIY options below.

Furthermore, think long and hard before you conduct a book cover design contest online. You might receive some interest and a few good submissions, but many graphic designers consider these contests a slap in the face, as you’re essentially asking them to work for free.

How much should you expect to pay for a designer? One survey from Written Word Media found that more than half of indie authors spend between $100 and $500 on book cover design.

But the real question isn’t how much you should spend, but rather how to know whether you’re spending your money with the right designer. Book cover designers are not shy about publicizing their services on the internet. It’s a lucrative business for artists who can work quickly and cleanly. 

So how do you pick from the thousands of options out there?

Examine their portfolio: Does the artist publish their art on social media? Do they have a website? Scope out their work, especially whether they’ve designed published book covers before, and take note of what the art evokes in you. Just don’t ask them to recreate something they’ve done for your book cover.

Dig into their software: Professional artists use professional tools—Photoshop, Adobe, Affinity, InDesign—to achieve professional results. If your favorite artist uses entry-level tools, like what we recommend in our DIY book design section below, consider taking a crack at designing your cover yourself first. You might be able to achieve similar results at the cost of a Saturday afternoon.

Ask about revisions: What happens if you receive a book cover that you like but don’t love? Some artists will bake revisions or variations on a single design into the cost. Others will charge separately. Both are reasonable, but find out upfront to avoid surprises. (Also ask about the number of revisions per project.)

How to make a book cover

You don’t need a degree in graphic design, expensive software, or even good taste to design your own book cover. 

If your budget doesn’t allow for professional graphic design, or you’re just curious at trying your hand at designing a book cover yourself, check out these tools and resources, all free and easy to use.

Book cover templates

Of all the options out there, Canva is the wildly popular graphic design platform with the most muscle for free book design. And while it does have a paid subscription, Canva Free is powerful enough, and simple enough, to produce eye-grabbing results, not to mention:

  • Free book cover templates (search “book cover”)
  • Color scheme generator based on imported images
  • Library of typefaces, effects, filters, and more

You can see a live demonstration of Canva on our Reel below:

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Stock image libraries

Interested in photography or illustrations for your book cover design, but don’t want to rely on smartphone snapshots or awkward stock imagery?

Good news! Stock photos and illustrations today aren’t as expensive or inaccessible as they used to be. Check out these stock image libraries:

When browsing these sites, be sure to check whether the images you like are cleared for commercial use, assuming you plan on selling your novel. And if you find something you like that isn’t free, it’s usually only a couple of bucks—a steal for the right artwork.

If you do incorporate an artist’s work into your book cover design, don’t forget to credit the artist in the front matter (the page at the beginning of every book where the ISBN information is). Often attribution isn’t required, but that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t do it.

Typography 101

When it comes to choosing typeface for your book color, there are two things to consider:  hierarchy and serifs versus sans serif typefaces.

Hierarchy is the selection of typeface, size, color, and composition for your text elements to draw the eye to the most important information and then move it to what’s next. We’re using hierarchy in this very blog post—notice how our headings and subheadings are different sizes, thicknesses, and colors? That’s hierarchy.

The hierarchy lesson for today is simple: Unless you are already a well-known writer (Stephen King, are you reading this?), your title is your most important piece of information, and your name is second place. As such, your title should be more prominent than, or as prominent as, your name. How you illustrate this prominence, through size, color, or composition, is up to you.

Typefaces, or fonts, come in two flavors: serif and sans serif. Serifs are the embellishments on letters.

The typeface we use here is sans serif, meaning without those serif embellishments.

This sentence, on the other hand, is a serif typeface.

Serif typefaces evoke in many a sense of the traditional and the established, of elegance, class, and timelessness.

Sans serif typefaces are hip and modern. They’re more casual, friendlier, and more approachable—some would even say more human.

When designing your book cover, stick with one or two typefaces only, and feel free to mix serif and sans serif. 

If you’re having trouble deciding which typeface to use on your book cover, research popular examples from novels in your same genre. Try out different fonts, and ask yourself: Does this font match the tone and style of my novel? Your beta readers and editors can always weigh in on this. 

Color theory 101

When selecting a color scheme for your book cover, focus on their distances from each other along a color wheel

In case you need a refresher: Colors across from each other on the color wheel are called complementary colors. Colors next to each other are called analogous colors. Complementary colors have intense contrast, creating a lot of pop, whereas analogous colors are calmer and more comfortable on the eyes.

To create a simple color scheme, start with a color, take the two colors on either side of it, lighten or darken those colors for additional options, and you’re done! That’s an analogous color scheme.

Want a palette with more contrast? Try a complementary or split-complementary color scheme, which pairs hues across the color wheel. To dial back contrast, pivot along the wheel or lighten or darken the colors. 

For example, say you want to use the complementary colors purple and yellow, but woah! That’s way too intense! You can rotate along the color wheel so that yellow becomes orange or green, or you can substitute the pure hues for shades or tints, like golden yellow and deep purple. For complementary color palettes, consider including a neutral color like white, gray, or black to take advantage of that complementary energy.

The internet is rife with lists on the psychology of colors, and we’ll leave it up to you to decide what colors best represent the story you want to tell, and for what reason.

But for those who are struggling to start, draw inspiration from other authors in your genre. Go to your bookshelf and pull out a few of your favorites, the novels that inspired you to write the story you’re designing a cover for. How does the color palette express the characters, the narrative, or the mood?

Also, fall back on genre conventions, the colors that might feel ridiculously obvious—black and crimson for horror or romance, neon blue and purple for science fiction.

Sample book cover designs

Using the tools and techniques listed above, I created a gallery of fake book covers, some in a matter of minutes.

Do any of these look like something you might check out of the library or buy online? Then our work here is done!

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How to Write a Novel Using the Snowflake Method

In the world of novel writing, there are planners and there are pantsers.

Planners don’t put pen to paper until they know who their protagonist is, where they’re going, and where they end up. Hell, some won’t start until they know their protagonist’s blood type, how they take their coffee, and their least favorite cousin.

Pantsers—as in fly-by-the-seat-of-your-pantsers—dive into the white void of the blank page without so much as a map or a decent pair of hiking shoes. The trails they blaze may lead them to caverns of untold story treasure—or straight into a pit of stalagmites and scorpions from which they will never return.

But what if we were to tell you there’s a third method of writing: the snowflake method? It’s wildly popular because it simplifies the outlining process and gives writers a strong springboard for the novel.

If you’re curious about how the snowflake method can help you build your novel, this is the article for you. In this blog, we’ll give you: 

  • A rundown of how the snowflake method works
  • Examples of the snowflake method using stories you already know
  • Templates you can use to start making your own snowflake outline 

We recommend downloading the templates now so you can review them as you read through this article. If you follow our advice, you’ll have everything you need to start outlining your next novel.

Definition of the snowflake method

Created by author, physicist, and self-proclaimed “computer geek” Randy Ingermanson, the snowflake method is a way to build a complex novel from a very simple idea. (Ingermanson says it’s based on a theoretical geometric shape known as a Koch snowflake.)

What begins as a summary sentence grows into the story itself—plot, characters, and all. And the best part is, since everything is based on a core idea, all the details therein feel connected and intentional and organic. Better still, the snowflake method doesn’t bog down the writer with minutia and discursions that won’t ever make it to the final cut.

Who needs the snowflake method?

The snowflake method is for planners and pantsers who want to try a different approach.

Planners tend to rely on linear roadmaps—think Campbellian monomyth, Kurt Vonnegut’s story shapes, Pixar’s famous formula for movies that make your parents cry. And while these are time-tested successes, maybe the planner is looking for a nonlinear organization tool that challenges them in ways these methods don’t.

Pantsers don’t play by the rules, but sometimes rules are what make the game. Experimentation without limit might produce a manuscript quickly, but what about cohesion? Great ideas told eloquently does not a story make. The snowflake method is a tether that grounds the pantser astronaut. It’s all the joy of exploration and none of the risk of drifting into space.

But most of all, the snowflake method is for the author of a million bright ideas and zero published novels. Sound like anyone you know?

Before we start outlining your novel

As we work through the following steps, take heed:

Don’t rush: Some steps take an hour, some a week, and some take even longer. If you speed through, you defeat the purpose of the snowflake method, which is, in part, to focus your attention on what matters in your story and ignore what doesn’t so you won’t waste time.

Go back if something feels wrong: If an area of your story lacks conflict or a character falls flat, it’s not a total loss! Go back a step and try to fix the problem there. Every step builds off the last, but that doesn’t mean you can’t reverse course and adjust as needed. 

Challenge yourself: The story you have in your head may not look like the story you have on the page. But the truth is, the story you have on the page is the story. So when the snowflake method takes you to foreign waters, try to go with the flow.

Step 1: Start with a sentence

Estimated Time: One hour or more

Like it or not, every story needs an elevator pitch.

In a single sentence of fifteen words or fewer, write what your story is about. Ingermanson recommends spending as much as an hour crafting the perfect sentence. After all, this is the particle from which your story snowflake will take shape.

Here are examples of one-sentence summaries of stories you might know:

  • A private detective investigates a murder aboard a transcontinental train. (Agatha Christie’s Murder on the Orient Express)
  • Seven friends contend with a monstrous foe that feeds on children. (Stephen King’s It)
  • Two stoners get into a world of trouble while going out for hamburgers. (Harold & Kumar Go to White Castle)

At this stage, you don’t need too many details—names, etc.—but you do want to set the stakes. What does your protagonist have to lose?

  • A bloodthirsty evil hunts a pirate crew as they search for an ancient treasure.
  • A nervous high school freshman gains the power to talk to inanimate objects.
  • A poor man goes to ridiculous lengths to inherit millions from a dying uncle.

In each of these examples you have a general idea of the cast of characters, the central conflict, and what’s at stake.

Pro tip: Though we omitted it from our examples, build your sentence around the word must. What must your protagonist do? Detective Poirot must find the murderer. The Losers Club must defeat Pennywise before he kills the children of Derry, Maine. Harold and Kumar must get to White Castle because … it’s White Castle and, man, are those burgers delicious.

Step 2: Grow your sentence into a paragraph

Estimated Time: One hour or more

After you have your perfect one-sentence summary, build it out to a paragraph of three to five sentences.

Again, this is not the place to add too much detail, but aim for a clear beginning, middle, and end. We recommend sticking to Ingermanson’s rule of fifteen words or fewer per sentence.

As an example, let’s use the story of Stephen King’s It again:

An evil presence is murdering children in the small town of Derry, Maine. The force, known as It, often appears as an evil clown, though the beast can also manifest as rivers of blood, a frightening house, or a leprous beggar. Most adults seem unable to see or understand It, but a group of outcast children band together to force it into hiding. Years later, when It returns from its hibernation, the group reunites as adults and returns to Derry to take down It once and for all. 

Step 3: Create basic character descriptions

Estimated Time: One hour per main character, a half hour per supporting character

In a separate document, compose a list of characters in your story. Start with your protagonist and antagonist, and then concoct a few minor characters.

Focus only on their motivations, but don’t write too much. A few words is all you need for now.

  • What do they want?
  • How do they plan to achieve it?
  • What’s standing in their way?
  • Once they overcome their obstacle, what have they learned? How have they changed?

Let’s take our made-up story about a high school freshman who talks to inanimate objects. He’s a ball of anxiety and just wants to fit in. Obviously mouthy lockers and chatty textbooks make him stand out—or rather, his reactions to them do. There’s his obstacle.

Does he try to ignore them? He might try to at first, but probably won’t work for long. Does he then have to break a curse that gives him this power? How can he do that when he has to cram for pre-calc? Perhaps his antagonist is a parent, or a school faculty member like a teacher or principal, or a nosy custodian, any of whom might think he’s on drugs or has fallen in with a bad crowd …

You get the idea.

But don’t move on to the next step until you understand, at least generally, where you want the arcs of each character to end. (Check out our guide on creating a strong character arc.)

Step 4: Turn your plot paragraph into a page

Estimated Time: Three to five hours

Set your characters aside and go back to your one-paragraph summary.

The first sentence is your Act One. Your second sentence is Act Two (or perhaps a major event that throws your character into Act Two). Separate these sentences and expand each of them into paragraphs of their own.

Besides hitting your one-page mark, you should focus on conflict—conflict between the protagonist and antagonist, conflicts between minor characters, and obstacles literal and figurative standing in your protagonist’s way. Here’s where you should also think about major events in the story—complications, disasters, twists, explosions, screw-ups, mistaken identities, and so on.

Step 5: Write a page for each character 

Estimated Time: Up to two days

Now it’s time to write one-page descriptions of your protagonist, your antagonist, and maybe even a supporting cast member or two. For everyone else, write about half a page.

Spend a little time on physical descriptions, but the bulk of this work should center on the character’s perspective throughout the story. You’re essentially writing it from their perspective.

This is a valuable and often overlooked aspect of good storycraft that both planners and pantsers get wrong. Have you ever read a story that felt like the supporting cast or the villain just went into a closet until the protagonist needed to square off against them? This is the cure. It also helps you incorporate your secondary characters more closely with the plot and the world-building.

Step 6: Expand your plot page to four pages

Estimated Time: Up to a week

What was once a sentence became a paragraph. What was once a paragraph became a page. Now the page becomes something more.

Return to the paragraphs you expanded in Step 4, the ones you turned into a full page of plot. Expand those paragraphs even further, until each of your paragraphs becomes its own page.

Don’t try to cram this work into a single evening. Take a few days to ruminate on the movements of your story, on whether the scenes you’re crafting have an ebb and a flow of tension.

  • Does the opening page launch your readers into the story and introduce the stakes enough?
  • Do your middle pages play against the major conflict of the story?
  • Does your last page feel like a resolution worthy of your whole novel?
  • Do your characters feel believable, relatable, and distinct?

Step 7: Craft full character profiles

Estimated Time: Up to a week

Planners, this is the moment you’ve been waiting for. You want to really dig into your cast of characters? Now’s the time.

Read through your four-page synopsis and make lists of your characters: your protagonist and antagonist in one column, your supporting characters in another, and perhaps a third for important tertiary characters. Then, incorporating the one-page descriptions, go through your characters one by one and write down every detail you can think of—everything from their backstory to their likes and dislikes to their unique skills to what drives them to be a part of the plot.

Have fun with it. Throw in simple favorites—color, food, pastime, music—even if you don’t think these trifles will come up in the story. You never know! What if a supporting character has a serious sweet tooth and passes a bakery during a crucial moment. Will the smells of cinnamon buns distract them from the task at hand, and will that distraction lead to (highly readable) chaos? The choice is yours, but nothing is too silly or outlandish, as long as you end up with well-rounded, believable characters.

Step 8: Organize a scene sheet

Estimated Time: Up to a week (or more)

You’ve got your four-page plot synopsis and your stack of character profiles. Now, use our template to begin plotting out your scenes. Our story about the telepathic teen will look something like this:

POV Character: Novels with more than one point of view (POV) are popular and exciting when done well. Examples from popular literature include Cloud Atlas, The Testaments, and The Power. 

If your novel has more than one POV, use this column to name which character is the POV for each scene. If your novel has only one POV, you can skip or delete this column.

Scene Details: In this column, you can copy and paste sentences from your synopsis that pertain to each scene. It’s important to note that by “scene,” we don’t mean chapter. We mean a small event in the plot of a story. A chapter might have two or three scenes, maybe more.

Extra Details: Make this spreadsheet your own by adding anything else you’d like to track. Here are a few ideas for extra columns you could add:

  • Character arcs: to track scenes that correspond with events important to individual characters.
  • Settings: to explore how the where affects what happens in each scene.
  • Page length: to estimate how much a scene takes up in the greater story.

But Invisible Ink Editing, the pantsers moan, why bring spreadsheets into this?

Spreadsheets are the perfect tool for plotting the beats of your story into scenes and chapters. Far too often, we receive manuscripts with chapters that end in weird places or low points, like when you watch a movie on cable TV with all its shoehorned commercial breaks, when these chapters should end with mini-cliffhangers, hints at what’s to come, and anything else that propels the reader forward. 

Finally, after your spreadsheet is filled out, use the column all the way to the left, titled Chapters, to group your scenes into different chapters. For now, go with what feels right. If three or four scenes take place in a single setting, perhaps that’s one chapter. Or maybe something big happens while the protagonist is in this setting, so that event is where one chapter ends and another begins.

Step 9: Build out your scene details (or start drafting)

Estimated Time: As long as it takes

Once you have your scene sheet completed, you’re ready to start writing your novel. You can do this in any word processor of your choice. Keep all of your snowflake worksheets on hand, as you’ll want to pull from them to flesh out your writing. 

Instead of forging ahead, planners may wish to commune with their inner pantser by exploring the scenes in prose: What might the protagonist see in the city square when she goes to meet the captain of the guard? What does the mysterious science teacher keep on his desk? What sorts of conversations might the main characters have about trade relations between Gorthax’s second and third moons?

Pantsers have been patient long enough. They will probably want to launch into the first draft. And having done some basic planning, which shouldn’t have felt like planning at all, they will know where they’re going and a good idea of how to get there.

Now that you’ve read through the process of the snowflake method, it’s time to start outlining your novel. Fill out the form below, and we’ll email you free templates to kickstart the process.

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How to write the ultimate antihero

An antihero is more than just a regular hero going through a goth phase. They are complicated, conniving, and gritty reminders of how people with good intentions can ultimately be truly terrible.

Antiheroes can be just as compelling as traditional heroes or villains, but they’re not always easy to pull off. Check out our lists of different breeds of antihero, the ingredients that make them who they are, and tips for how you can craft the most deliciously complex antihero in your novel.

What is an antihero?

An antihero is a hero we didn’t expect, one that subverts our expectations of a classic hero.

Traditional heroes are bold, strong, merciful, and selfless. Antiheroes may hold some of those characteristics, but they’ll most likely lack many of those traits and suffer from their shortcomings. They are narcissists, criminals, misanthropes, loners, or bigots. Sometimes they even commit serious crimes.

Antiheroes can still be protagonists, vessels through which your audience experiences a story. Flawed though they may be, readers are meant to relate to their struggles and successes.

Different kinds of antiheroes

No two characters are the same, but we can group antiheroes into different groups. Here are some of the most common.

Misguided antiheroes

Many antiheroes stumble their way into the role of classic hero. What begins with a selfish desire—laziness, a quick buck, seclusion—ends in altruism and doing good. 

  • Han Solo needs money to pay off his debt to Jabba the Hutt. But by the end of Star Wars: A New Hope, he fights alongside the Rebellion against Darth Vader, despite his claims that he’s only looking out for himself.
  • At the beginning of his movie, Shrek, a reclusive, fart-laden ogre, just wants to be left alone in his swamp. But after surviving a dangerous quest, making friends with an annoying talking donkey, and falling in love with a cursed princess, companionship becomes more important to him.

Antiheroes seeking redemption

Other antiheroes commit great wrongs and are under the misguided belief that they cannot redeem themselves. Chances are good that a well-constructed narrative might prove otherwise.

  • Ebenezer Scrooge seems like a villain in the first few pages of A Christmas Carol, but do you remember what made him such a Dickensian tightwad? Parental abandonment, strict schoolmasters, and, as a result, an inability to love. It takes three Christmas ghosts to show him the error of his ways and give him the opportunity to change.
  • The titular character from Phoebe Waller-Bridge’s Fleabag is so manipulative, immoral, and cynical that we can’t help but binge-watch the hell out of this human catastrophe. But as we learn about the dark secret at the core of the show’s first season, her self-destructive actions take on new meaning: they are the struggle of a person who is barely a hero at all, but nonetheless fights to get the monkey off her back all by herself.

Antiheroes settling a score

Antiheroes might appeal to our sense of justice—or rather, our distaste for great injustice. Although their goal is to commit what, out of context, might be considered an evil act, they do so to balance the scales. The ends, they believe, justify the means.

  • Robin Hood is the classic example. You know from whom he steals, and you know to whom he gives—and, in your heart of hearts, you know why.
  • In Kill Bill: Vol. 1, Beatrix Kiddo loses her unborn child after her near assassination. As a result, she swears revenge on every member of the Deadly Viper Assassination Squad.

Antiheroes in the right place at the right time

Maybe it’s a complete coincidence that your antihero’s goals align with what feels right. They’re simply a flat, amoral mercenary, and unlike the Han Solos of the world, they’re not going to undergo great change. They’re just here to do a job.

  • Geralt of Rivia from The Witcher series is the antihero you need, not the hero you want. He lacks manners and respect for anything other than his personal code, but for a few coins, he hunts and slays whatever lurks in your wildest nightmares. Just don’t try to drag him into personal squabbles or local politics.
  • Journalist Raoul Duke, the protagonist in Hunter S. Thompson’s Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, was hired to cover a motorcycle race. No great heroics there. But though the novel lacks a clear plot beyond getting as high and drunk as two men can get, Duke’s irreverence and impetuousness paints a scathing portrait of American disillusionment in the early 1970s. (Basically, his antagonists are Nixon and the Vietnam War.)

The ingredients of an antihero

Antiheroes are typically more complex than your traditional heroes. But like any good character in a novel, they need to be believable and, in some way, admirable to your reader. 

If you’re working on crafting a strong antihero for your novel, here are a few key ingredients to get it right.

Realistic flaws

A part of your antihero is decidedly not heroic. Maybe it’s something from their past or a way they act right now.

But do not stop with the what. Ask yourself:

  • What events and decisions made them who they are at the start of the story?
  • How can you show this backstory through action and description without relying on exposition dumps? (See our article on showing vs. telling for more on this.)
  • If your antihero starts the novel as a bad guy, why do they have to be bad?

Now pit that flaw against a heroic quality they do have. Would that clash make for an interesting inner conflict? Here are a few made-up examples: 

  • Dishonesty vs. selflessness: A renowned doctor lies to her superiors about her patient’s condition in order to prescribe him an experimental drug that she thinks will cure him. The drug kills the patient, and now an investigation into the treatment has begun.
  • Weakness vs. determination: A scrawny young man is mugged. He begins taking steroids and training so no one will take advantage of him like that again. What is he willing to do to the people who love him in order to get his next fix?
  • Injustice vs. morality: An up-and-coming lawyer must defend a man she knows is guilty of a heinous crime. She secretly spoon feeds the prosecution strong arguments against her own case in the hopes that her client will pay for what he did.

A set of clear goals

Every protagonist needs both short-term and long-term goals. Antiheroes are no different. How they differ is in the nature of the goals and the challenges that separate them from their goals.

Say your antihero has to steal a diamond from a jeweler to pay back a mob boss who’s holding his son hostage. The mob boss demands that the antihero leave no loose ends. The protagonist breaks into the jewelry store and nearly escapes with the loot when the elderly owner catches him red-handed. The owner reaches for the alarm. Does the antihero kill the old man before he can alert the police? Or does he make a break for it, thus jeopardizing the mission and his chances of saving his son? 

What does your antihero want? What do they think they will achieve once they have it? What are they willing to do to complete their quest?

A fundamental misbelief

Your antihero’s backstory and flaw inform a misbelief about the world. It could be simple: “No matter what, no one will ever love me because of what I did.” It could be more complex: “Betting on racehorses is the only way out of this two-bit town.”

The arc of the story could end with the protagonist uncovering and reacting to a truth that runs contrary to their original misbelief. “In order for people to love me, I have to love myself.”

Or, for a tragic ending more befitting your brooding antihero, they may discover that they were right all along. “I bet everything to make a life for myself, and my luck has finally run out.”

To develop a well-rounded misbelief for your antihero, consider the following:

  • How does the antihero present himself to the world?
  • How does the antihero see himself honestly?
  • How do the people closest to him see him?
  • How does society see him?
  • How might this misbelief impact the choices he makes throughout the story?

A worthy antagonist

Do antiheroes have antivillains? They might! All heroes, anti- or otherwise, need an antagonizing force that stands in the way of achieving their goals. It could be a single figure (a dogged police chief) or an organization (a corrupt government). The flaws, misbeliefs, and motivations of these antagonists, however, should be as clear as the protagonist’s.

Tips for writing an antihero

Your antihero will be completely unique, so these tips won’t apply to every type of antihero. But if you’re struggling to flesh out your antihero, consider some of these tactics:

Bury their heroism in plain sight

Most antiheroes do have heroic qualities, but they’re often eclipsed by their dark sides. That’s perfectly fine, but remember to give the reader glimpses at their inner light.

An assassin who turns down a job from her assassins’ guild to kill a child tells us that she has a personal moral code. Though she may do a dirty job, she is apart from the soulless institution that dictates her life. That’s a hint to the reader that she’s more hero than they might think.

Heck, the very fact that Chewbacca sits shotgun on the Millennium Falcon tells us that Han Solo might talk a big game about not needing friends, but deep down he craves companionship, even if he doesn’t know how to show it with kind words. Their Odd Couple camaraderie is all the evidence you need.

Look for real-life examples of antiheroes

Have you ever quietly cheered while reading a news article about someone who broke the law but did it for a good reason? Then you, in a very small way, rooted for an antihero.

If you’re struggling to write a compelling antiheroic protagonist, consider researching real antiheroes and their motives, as well as the mores, rules, or laws they broke. How did they get caught? Some people will laud their actions. Others will disapprove. What are the pros and cons of either line of thinking?

Give them an opportunity to cut and run

For antiheroes who deny a higher calling, there should come a moment where they’ve achieved everything they’ve set out to achieve. Han Solo eventually got his payment. Why does he have to stick around? 

He doesn’t, and that’s the point. He chooses to turn his ship around and fight for the Rebellion not because they’re going to pay him, but because his newfound family needs him, and deep down he knows it is the right thing to do.

Make us sympathize with them

Sure, you’ve probably never stolen cars, lied to congress, or saved a city with your personal brand of vigilantism, but that doesn’t mean you can’t understand why someone would do those things for the right reasons.

Antiheroes allow us to indulge in dark fantasies of being a leather-clad badasses, but they are an exercise in seeing life through the eyes of good people who made bad decisions, suffered greatly, or were dealt bad hands by the universe. There’s catharsis in that. We can all think of times where we acted unheroically. But that doesn’t mean there isn’t a little hero hiding underneath our bullshit.

Editing the antihero in your novel

Is there something off about your antihero? (You know, beside the ego, profanity, or ancient blood curse?

A developmental editor can shape your antihero into a strong and compelling protagonist that will carry your novel to its delightfully bitter end. They can also help you craft a plot that forces them (and your readers) to question their beliefs and see things from another point of view.

Need some help crafting your antihero? That’s what we’re here for! Submit a sample of your manuscript and receive a free edit of 5,000 words from one of our editors.

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Mastering Hyphens and Dashes

Contrary to popular belief, hyphens and dashes are not interchangeable lines you can sprinkle over your manuscript like cracked pepper. 

Hyphens (-), en dashes (–), and em dashes (—) are tools of your trade. Understanding their nuances will make you a better reader and writer. 

Let’s take a closer look and break down exactly what each is used for.

Hyphens vs. dashes

So what’s the difference between hyphens and dashes? 

Dashes are longer than hyphens, but more importantly, they serve different functions in a sentence. 

The first thing you need to know is that there are two different types of dashes: em dashes (—) and en dashes (–). They also serve different functions, which is where things get a little confusing—but we’ll get into that later. 

For now, you can remember this basic rule of thumb: Em dashes connect phrases, whereas hyphens connect words. More often than not, en dashes connect numbers (ex. 2001–2013).

(Fun fact: Do you know how em and en dashes got their names? Because they are, respectively, the width of an m and an n.)

Text showing the difference between an em dash and an en dash

How to type an em dash

On PC with numpad: Hold ALT and type 0151 on the numpad.

On Mac: Hold Option and Shift, then hit the hyphen key.

How to type an en dash

On PC: Hold ALT and type 0150 on the numpad.

On Mac: Hold Option and press the hyphen key.

Now that we’ve got the basics down, let’s go deeper into these different types of punctuation, with lots of examples. 

Why are hyphens necessary?

Hyphens may be small, but they can have a big impact on sentence comprehension. Consider the difference between these two sentences:

Steve is a small-business owner. (Steve owns a small business.)

Steve is a small business owner. (Steve is a short guy who owns a business.)

In this instance, the hyphenated words (small-business) act together as an adjective, describing the noun that follows (owner)—what your editor would call a compound modifier or a compound adjective

How to spot compound modifiers

Compound modifiers are notoriously difficult to identify, so let’s start with the basics.

As with the previous example, a hyphen strings together words that (a) act in unison to describe a single noun and (b) come before that noun in the sentence. Here are some examples: 

The strange man had a six-inch-long nose.

The young girl looks fabulous with her rose-red hair

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The eleven-year-old champagne was bubbly and refined.

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The scary-looking dog was foaming at the mouth.

Simple, right? Well, we’re not done yet. This wouldn’t be an English grammar lesson without a slew of exceptions.

Exception No. 1: Watch out for coordinate adjectives

Don’t be tempted to hyphenate two separate adjectives describing the same noun, also known as coordinate adjectives:

The police chief is a tough, gruff woman.

Here, the police chief is tough, and she is also gruff. Each of these adjectives could be used individually to describe her, so there’s no need to hyphenate them.

But you would use hyphens if you wrote compound modifiers that serve as coordinate adjectives, like in the following example:

The police chief is a no-nonsense, mean-spirited woman.

Exception No. 2: Watch out for location in the sentence

Where words appear in a sentence matters. If a compound modifier comes before the noun it describes, then add a hyphen. If it comes after, then don’t hyphenate.

Dr. Jamison is a well-regarded physician.

In her field, Dr. Jamison is well regarded.

Exception No. 3: Don’t hyphenate adverbs (words that end in -ly)

Never hyphenate adverbs ending in -ly, even if the adverb-adjective compound comes before a noun. Why? Because the adverb is simply doing what it does best: enhancing an adjective. No need for special punctuation!

WRONG: Max is an incredibly-enthusiastic fan of chocolate.

RIGHT: Max is an incredibly enthusiastic fan of chocolate.

But there are instances where adverbs that don’t end in -ly would require hyphenation if used in a compound modifier. But even that really depends on the context. Since we’re getting in the grammar weeds again, here’s an illustrative example:

What is the worst-paid job? (What job pays the worst?)

What is the worst paid job? (What paid job is the worst?)

In the first example, worst is an adverb that enhances paid. Used together as a compound modifier, they describe job.

In the second example, worst is an adjective, and so is paid. Worst describes paid job, not only job. (Because paid carries more weight as an adjective than worst, they are not coordinate adjectives, which would require a comma.)

What are hanging hyphens?

Hanging hyphens occur when two compound modifiers, often connected with a conjunction such as and, share a common word. It’s called a hanging hyphen because you leave the hyphen hanging off the first compound modifier:

Do you have short- and long-term goals for your career?

Late seventeenth- or eighteenth-century literature can be enlightening.

Note the space that follows the hanging hyphen. It might feel wrong, but it is oh so right.

When to use em dashes

The em dash is the jack-of-all-trades of the punctuation family; it can stand in for many forms of punctuation.

So when should you use an em dash instead of these other forms of punctuation? That’s up to you and your editor. There’s no hard-and-fast rule here. It’s all about how your sentence feels in the moment, with or without the em dash.

1. Parentheses

In the examples below, the em dashes are serving the same function as the parentheses: to separate nonessential information from the rest of the sentence.

The best players on the basketball team (Rory, James, and Craig) happen to be the shortest players.

The best players on the basketball team—Rory, James, and Craig—happen to be the shortest players.

2. Commas

In a few choice instances, an em dash can mimic the brief pause made by a comma in a compound sentence. At the right moment, an em dash can even add a drop of suspense by elongating that pause:

Roberta saw the blood, but where was the knife?

Roberta saw the blood—but where was the knife?

Like parentheses, sometimes commas set aside nonessential phrases. (If you want to get extra nerdy about it, these are called nonrestrictive appositive phrases.) 

Em dashes work with these as well.

Her Christmas sweater, a mishmash of green bows and jingle bells, was the hit of the holiday party.

Her Christmas sweater—a mishmash of green bows and jingle bells—was the hit of the holiday party.

3. Colons

A colon or an em dash can signal to a reader that clarifying information is to come:

He knew what he had to do: run away screaming.

He knew what he had to do—run away screaming.

4. Semicolons

Want to connect two independent clauses without joining them with a conjunction? Use a semicolon or an em dash:

Our dogs are well-behaved; they never bark or bite.

Our dogs are well-behaved—they never bark or bite.

Bonus: Interrupted or cut-off speech

Writers often use em dashes in dialogue to show a sudden interruption:

“Mom!” Gwen said, startled. “I was just—”

“Sneaking out of your bedroom in the dead of night?”

Warning: Do not use a hyphen to show stammering or trailing off. Use an ellipsis (. . .) instead.

“I . . . I . . . can’t remember,” he said.

“If you’re down here,” she said, “then that means . . .”

When to use en dashes

An en dash is not as flexible as its slightly longer sibling. It serves very specific purposes, often involving numbers instead of words:

1. Sports scores or votes

Writing the next great basketball novel or political thriller? Then familiarize yourself with the en dash:

The Gooberville Goats beat the Wickerburg Wombats 35–18.

Congress voted 297–138 to pass the bill.

2. Ranges

I bet you didn’t know how popular en dashes are in graveyards and churches. You can’t complete a tombstone or bible study without them.

Ella Fitzgerald (1917–1996) was a jazz singer like no other.

I have attended too many weddings that include a reading of 1 Corinthians 13:4–8.

3. In place of the word to

Amaze your friends and colleagues by knowing the exact kind of dash that can stand in for to:

The Boston–Chicago train leaves in an hour.

The years 2001–2007 were his most formative.

During Happy Hour at Milo’s Pub, 5:00 p.m.–6:00 p.m., buffalo wings are half price.

Warning: Do not use an en dash to replace the word to when the range in question is preceded by words like from or between. Just write out to.

WRONG: Bus service was suspended from 10:00 p.m.–6:00 a.m.

RIGHT: Bus service was suspended from 10:00 p.m. to 6:00 a.m.

4. Connecting a compound modifier with proper nouns

Remember compound modifiers? Remember how we said you connect them with hyphens? And remember when we said that English grammar is chock full of exceptions?

Well, here’s yet another. When you create a compound modifier with proper nouns, you use an en dash—but only between the final two words in the compound modifier. Why? When you find out, let us know. 

WRONG: The Academy-Award-winning actor also happened to be a hell of a poker player.

WRONG: The Academy–Award–winning actor also happened to be a hell of a poker player.

RIGHT: The Academy Award–winning actor also happened to be a hell of a poker player.

Hyphen or dash? Ask an editor.

Believe it or not, this list isn’t complete. There are many more ways to use hyphens, en dashes, and em dashes—and even more exceptions! If you’re struggling with hyphens and dashes in your creative manuscript, reach out to Invisible Ink Editing. Our editors love to talk about the nuances of grammar and the ways to improve writing through perfect punctuation.